Prompted

Posted on October 5, 2015October 5, 2015 by Davy Benoot Posted in UncategorizedTagged Change, Haiku, Past, writing201

You used to prompt me
Now show pictures of people
I swipe off my screen

8 thoughts on “Prompted”

October 5, 2015 at 10:28 pm Reply
Cathy Lynn Brooks says:

I like it!

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October 5, 2015 at 10:28 pm Reply
cbhanek says:

Amazing how much history and mystery you packed into 17 words. Thanks for sharing!

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1. October 5, 2015 at 10:44 pm Reply
  Davy Benoot says:
  
  Thank you, much appreciated. Sometimes that history makes me feel old and make me think about my father and his stories about tape recorders and Denon turntable. Should I have kept my good old Commodore computer?
  
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October 5, 2015 at 10:31 pm Reply
cbhanek says:

Sorry, Correction. 17 syllables; 15 words

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October 5, 2015 at 10:59 pm Reply
Fuzzy Panda Barista says:

Wow. that evokes nostalgia and almost regret. I like the “pictures of people I swipe off my screen.” Nice alliteration.

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1. October 5, 2015 at 11:26 pm Reply
  Davy Benoot says:
  
  Thanks, nostalgia that’s mission accomplished, I’m glad 🙂
  
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October 5, 2015 at 11:25 pm Reply
empress2inspire says:

Oh such simple yet meaningful words..from MS-DOS to touch screens…incredible. Thank you for such a Great post. Looking forward to more.

Best to you

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1. October 6, 2015 at 12:06 am Reply
  Davy Benoot says:
  
  Thanks, I’m glad you like it. I didn’t expect it would affect so many readers. All the best
  
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